reason for rejection

I check the reason for rejection.

私は差し戻し理由を確認します

I check the reason for rejection after being asked to revise it.

私は修正依頼を受けて差し戻し理由を確認します

I check the reason for rejection on the approval system after being asked to revise it.

私は決裁システムで修正依頼を受けて差し戻し理由を確認します

I check the reason for rejection on the approval system straight away after being asked to revise it.

私はすぐに決裁システムで修正依頼を受けて差し戻し理由を確認します

I check the reason for rejection on the approval system straight away with the person in charge, after being asked to revise it.

私は担当者と一緒にすぐに決裁システムで修正依頼を受けて差し戻し理由を確認します